The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates the way in which
bricks
are manufactured for the building industry.
Overall
, bricks
pass through different stages such
as digging, refining, rolling, moulding, drying and cooling, respectively. In the process
of making bricks
, however
, a number of tools are required to convert them into their final form.
In the first stage of making brick
, clay is dug from the ground with the help of a heavy machinery digger, and before being placed on a roller, the clay is refined through the metal grid. After that, the refined clay is mixed with sand and water, which is then
shaped into a raw form, either by using a mould or a wire cutter.
In the next step, bricks
are dried in the oven for 24 to 49 hours. After that, bricks
are kept in a kiln at both a moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 °C, which is then
placed in a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. This
process
makes the brick
ready to be packed and delivered in the final two sreps
. The delivery Correct your spelling
steps
reps
process
is the final process
of brick
manufacturing, and as it is noted, brick making
is a moderately complex Add a hyphen
brick-making
process
that requires some predefined work to make it usable.Submitted by crpnivedya.prasannan on
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