Working hard and being
are
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to be a key
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a bright future.
, insist that
and looks play a greater
in helping a person succeed. In my opinion, both views have their merits.
good looks or
alone cannot help a person succeed, in many
hard
or
is not sufficient either.
On the
hand,hard
and
can reduce the length of
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to
.
with ,on that road ,there are many difficulties which are the barriers.We need
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hard-working to break them.
,paying attention studiously to
can help us collect experience,being more flexible and open our knowledge,all of them are going to contribute to increasing
our chances of
.
BesideReplace the word
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that,
is an enormous source of energy,it plays an important
in improving mood when working,
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the stress from
workplaceAdd an article
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,and
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the ambition not to give up our job.
, James Cameron, a major figure in the
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Hollywood era, and
of the industry's most innovative filmmakers,used to be a poor driver.But having worked hard and been
,he was successful in achieving
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.
, there are certain other
where good looks or wealth can help a person succeed. In show business,
, attractive looks play a huge
. Good looks are extremely important for someone who wants to be an actor or television show host.
can
help
buy
. Rich kids often get to study in
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colleges even if they are not particularly brilliant. The connections they make there help them achieve greater
in future.
, they have capital to invest so
comes to them more easily.Even in
like medicine, law or business, attractive looks improve a hardworking person’s
substantially. Clients may prefer a
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attorney to a plain
. Good looks
enhance a person’s
self confidenceAdd a hyphen
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. They are not exactly afraid of rejection and
confidence
plays a crucial
in boosting their
.
In conclusion, in some
hard
and
are enough to achieve
.
, there are certain other
where looks matter more. That said, good looks or
alone will not suffice. Attractive and rich people
have to try
they have it a whole lot easier.