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Band 3

Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, technology has made life activities
more
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easier than past time. People can
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download
 everything from the
internet
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by
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 one click,
e-book
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 and music,
for example
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This
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shows
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 the positive
behined
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behind
this
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 phenomenon. The detrimental merit is that can be reached to knowledge with less effort and cost. Flaks only need
to
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devices and
internet
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 networks to gain a massive amount of information from e-books and other types of multimedia.
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, students and researchers usually rely on e-books because they will save
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time and money,
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 they will have a lot of knowledge.
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, they major of them
they
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prefer to download
a books
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books
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 from the website.
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, people who tend to
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 to music,
they
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used
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 to download a copyrighted of
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musics
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music
kinds of music
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 from the
internet
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 , rather than buy it. My brother,
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is
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mostly
updata
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updates
 his car songs from a certain site.
Moreover
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,
begginers
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beginner
musicer
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music
musical
dependen
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depend
 on global networking to listen
for
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 various
pices
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pieces
 of
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musics
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music
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.
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, they learn
who
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 to
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musics
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music
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 by imitating the music they had heard on YouTube or on other
application
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.
To sum up
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downloud
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download
 books and
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musics
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music
kinds of music
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 from the
internet
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has
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a
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many
of
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advantages
such
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gain
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a knowledge
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knowledge
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 and listening to
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musics
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music
kinds of music
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 freely, and with
less
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costs
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cost
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 and
efforts
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effort
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.

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task achievement
Provide a clear introduction that outlines the essay structure. The introduction should clearly state your position on whether the development is positive or negative, including both sides if necessary for a balanced view.
coherence cohesion
Improve the organizational structure of your essay. Use paragraphs effectively, each focusing on a single idea, with a clear topic sentence and supporting sentences. Transition words like 'Moreover', 'For instance', and 'Furthermore' should be used to connect ideas smoothly.
task achievement
Support your main points with more specific examples and explanations. Whenever you make a claim, follow it up with an example or detailed explanation to strengthen your argument.
task achievement
Remember to discuss both the positive and negative aspects of the topic, providing a balanced view. Your conclusion should summarily address both sides and restate your position clearly.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Aim for variety in sentence structures and accuracy in word usage to enhance fluency and coherence. Frequent errors can make it harder for the reader to understand your points.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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