The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram demonstrates the
producing
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process of
noodles
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which can be eaten immediately. During the first step, flour transported by truck is poured into storage silos to produce
mixer
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a mixer
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.
Then
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, water and oil are added to the mixer
containing
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in a box.
Next,
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the box laying on the dough sheets is transported by rollers to be
further
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manufactured. In the
firth
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fourth
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step, the dough is cut into strips which are the original appearances of the
noodles
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. After the
noodles
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are
finally
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manufactured, they are packed in
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noodles
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noodle
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discs and
then
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oil is poured to cook. When the process of drying is completed,
vagetables
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vegetables
and spices which are able to make the instant
noodles
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more delicious are added
into
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to
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the cups. The final step
are
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is
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labelling which needs to stick labels on the surfaces of the cups and sealing. At
last
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, plenty cups of
noodels
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noodles
are manufactured and sent to
supermarket
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supermarkets
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to
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for
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sale.
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, the complex process consisting
8
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of 8
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steps in total to make instant
noodles
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in the manufacturer is indeed
neccessary
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necessary
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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