The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph chart depicts the carbon dioxide
emissions
for every person in the United
Kingdom
, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. The value is using CO2
emissions
in metric tonnes. In general, Portugal and Italy tend to rise.
On the other hand
, the United
Kingdom
has a declining trend and
Sweden
has a fluctuating tendency. Looking in more detail, Italy and Portugal had the same trend, which gradually increased starting from 1967 to 2007. Portugal, as the lowest place, began from approximately 1.6 which rose up gradually and eventually caught up with the pace to roughly 4.8.
Similarly
, Italy which on the third position overtook
Sweden
in 1987. Italy was starting 4.1
emissions
eventually in 2007 became second place. United
Kingdom
started as the first with around 10.4
emissions
then
steadily declined from 1967 to 2007.
In contrast
with Italy or
Sweden
, the United
Kingdom
was still on the top
emissions
with nearly 8.5 gas.
Sweden
as the second position was having oscillation where they started at approximately 8.3 and
then
became the ground position.
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