You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give details about the concert describe how you won the tickets explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear friend,
With thoughts of you in mind, I pen
this
letter, wishing for your well-being. we both have a common interest in music and admire going to live music concerts. I've
Change the wording
I have
I have got
I've got
a exciting news
for you, I won two Remove the article
exciting news
a piece of exciting news
pass
for Change to a plural noun
passes
the
Charlie Puth's live concert gonna be held Correct article usage
apply
in
the downtown on 26th Change preposition
apply
March
evening.
You may remember, Change preposition
of March
from
Change preposition
for
last
few Correct article usage
the last
weeks
Add a comma
weeks,
I'm
following a ritual. As I Wrong verb form
I've been
recieve
my salary, I Put some share out to buy lottery tickets. Correct your spelling
receive
Although
, I wasn't luckly
enough in past Correct your spelling
lucky
luckily
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
this
time I made a cut and won the concert tickets. I can't describe in words how happy I was at that time.
You know what as soon as I won the tickets, I quickly start
thinking of you. I believe we'll enjoy Wrong verb form
started
this
music concert. Also
Add a comma
Also,
its
been a long timeReplace the word
it's
it is
I
saw you, so I think we can get some to make our bond even stronger.
Please let me know if you are coming. Try to be there we'll enjoy Correct word choice
since I
best
of both worlds, I'll waiting for your reply.
Correct article usage
the best
Untill
we Correct your spelling
Until
met
, sending positive vibes Wrong verb form
meet
yours
way.
Kind regards,
Sameer Rana.Correct pronoun usage
your
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Grammar and Spelling
Make sure to proofread your letter for any spelling or grammatical mistakes. For example, 'pass' should be 'passes', 'luckly' should be 'lucky', and 'I Put some share out to buy lottery tickets' should be rephrased for clarity. Ensuring proper grammar and spelling will significantly improve the readability of your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider transitioning more smoothly between paragraphs. Use linking words or phrases such as 'Furthermore', 'Additionally', or 'Consequently' to make your letter flow better from one idea to the next.
Task Response
Try to elaborate more on why you chose your friend to go with you to the concert, beyond just your shared interest in music. Including personal anecdotes or specific qualities of your friend can provide a more complete response and personalize your letter further.