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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tons) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tons) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
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The table highlights data about the quantity of
waste
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, which was produced in some countries, over a twenty-year period from 1980 to 2000.
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, what stands out from the graph is that the US produced the highest amount of
waste
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 over the period in question. The interesting point is that apart from Korea, other countries saw an upward trend. Looking into detail, as regards the US,
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accounted for 131
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tons
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 in 1980,
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then
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 increased to 192 in 2000. As for Japan, Poland and Portugal, the rising trends were
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 seen. Japan’s
waste
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 output rose significantly from 28 to 53
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tons
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,
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 Poland and Portugal increased slightly from 4 to 6.6 and from only 2 to 5
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tons
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 respectively. If we look at Ireland, the
waste
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 that was produced made up 0.6
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tons
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, after which witnessed a substantial growth in the subsequent years (5
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tons
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). As for Korea, it declined considerably from 31 to 19
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tons
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 between 1990 and 2000.
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