**At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.** **Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?**

There are ongoing discourse on whether large populations of young

adults

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better than

the

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number

of older

people

. Some might think the

number

of older

people

is better than a large

number

of young

adults

.

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, I feel compelled to the idea that there are more advantages of the situation where increasing of younger

generation

than others. First of all,

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young

adults

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generations encourages individuals to enhance the quality of lives. In response to the decreasing

number

of birth rates, many expert opinions and research statistics reinforce the idea that supporting

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number

of young

adults

enables individuals to find satisfaction in their lives.

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,

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taking care of

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to growing up, parents can realize

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of family relationships, contributing to

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genuine

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in their

live

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. Another reason that increasing of younger

generation

would be advantageous is that it would help economic growth. Younger

adults

can develop their skills or discover new technologies, contributing to

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good effects on capitalism. On the other

hands

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, there are disadvantages

of

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a large

number

of young

adults

.

Younger

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generation

are

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not fully

skillful

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in many

perspective

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,

such

as business

manner

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or living one’s life compared to older

people

, individuals need to take

a

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time and learn to be

best

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version of themselves.

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, by rising

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number

of younger

people

,

generation

gaps can arise

one

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of

social

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issues among

people

, leading to miscommunication between young and older

people

. In conclusion, the advantage of a population with a higher

number

of young

adults

offer

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opportunities to enjoy a better quality of

lives

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life

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and develop economic perspectives.