In that present time, some believe that
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to
work
with determination is giving a success in life,
whereas
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the
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side say that finance and look are more vital bases than hard
work
.
This
writer agrees that
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more important factors than
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.
It must be recognized that some
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should be diligent to
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achievement.
This
is because
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they cannot get their jobs or make
money
for their life without their ability and assiduous.
As a result
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humans
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their
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and improve them
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travail, they can be successful in many walks of life and
be happy. If they
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how can they know about where they are standing and what they can do? It
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to when they are hard-working, they can see what can they do and their ambition.
Therefore
, it is easy to understand why human
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should be
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to easy for
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success.
However
, some said that
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and
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are more crucial bases than hard
work
and that enough for
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of their
work
.
This
belief is based on
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by the simple
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beautiful or
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a lot of
money
and they think that determination that not necessary in successful.
For
this
reason, they
also
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on their
money
or sometimes it
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their own
instead
of
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money
.
This
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may be true,
although
people who
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a lot of
money
or have a beautiful appearance,
they Correct pronoun usage
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must try to get an achievement not just depend on
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beauty or
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money
.
Thus
writers
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that
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must depend on theirself by their ambition. Becoming
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on
money
or beauty
that Correct pronoun usage
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need to be
.
Hence
it should have been shown that people should be confident of their ability and enhance them by industriousness.