The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
The diagram below indicates
production
of instant noodles from Add an article
the production
Correct article usage
the manufacture
manufacture
.
Replace the word
manufacturer
Overall
, there are eight different process
of Change to a plural noun
processes
make
Change the verb form
making
a
instant noodles Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
start
from Wrong verb form
starting
truck
that Add an article
a truck
the truck
contain
the flour to labelling and sealing.
Change the verb form
contains
To begin
with, the truck distribute
flour to Correct subject-verb agreement
distributes
storge
silos Correct your spelling
storage
then
use Correct word choice
and then
mixing
machine that Correct article usage
a mixing
consist
of water and oil. Change the verb form
consists
Next
pass the rollers change to dough sheets and Add a comma
Next,
strips
the dough to make Correct subject-verb agreement
strip
discs
shape.
Turning to Fix the agreement mistake
disc
cooking
part with oil and drying. Correct article usage
the cooking
Afterward
prepare Add a comma
Afterward,
a
cups that Correct article usage
apply
compose
of Wrong verb form
are composed
vetgetable
and seasoning Correct your spelling
vegetables
vegetable
then
put the noodles in. Final
stage paste up the label Correct article usage
The final
then
sealing and ready transport to customer
.Add an article
the customer
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