The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
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The diagram below indicates
production
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the production
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of instant noodles from
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the manufacture
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manufacture
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manufacturer
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.
Overall
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, there are eight different
process
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processes
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of
make
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making
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a
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apply
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instant noodles
start
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starting
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from
truck
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a truck
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that
contain
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contains
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the flour to labelling and sealing.
To begin
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with, the truck
distribute
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distributes
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flour to
storge
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storage
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silos
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then
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and then
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use
mixing
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a mixing
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machine that
consist
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consists
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of water and oil.
Next
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pass the rollers change to dough sheets and
strips
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strip
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the dough to make
discs
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disc
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shape. Turning to
cooking
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the cooking
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part with oil and drying.
Afterward
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prepare
a
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apply
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cups that
compose
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are composed
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of
vetgetable
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vegetables
vegetable
and seasoning
then
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put the noodles in.
Final
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The final
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stage paste up the label
then
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sealing and ready transport to
customer
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the customer
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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