IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given line graph illustrates the number of
students
Use synonyms
 who studied abroad in the US,UK and Australia between 2002 and 2007, a period of 5 years. It can be seen that the US was the pioneer in sending
students
Use synonyms
 compared to 2 other countries.
This
Linking Words
 rate decreased in the UK
while
Linking Words
 Australia remained steady. Looking at the details, the US started with 50000
students
Use synonyms
 in 2002 followed by the UK with 30000.
Although
Linking Words
 the US trend experienced a slight drop to around 45000 in 2004, it recovered its previous level in 2006 and remained steady toward the end of the period (2007). The latter
leveled
Change the spelling
levelled
show examples
 out until 2003 before falling to around 21000
at the end
Linking Words
 of the period.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the lowest number of
students
Use synonyms
 was from Australia with 10000
students
Use synonyms
 in 2002 and remained unchanged during all years.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: