Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are many arguments that there will be numerous issues related to society and real-world challenges if the residents are required to use another
language
in parallel with the official one.
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my perspective,
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don't really go for
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assertion because of two reasons that
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will mention below. First of all,
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second
language
can enrich a country in terms of
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.
For instance
, in Malaysia, Mandarin, English and Indian are widely used
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the mother tongue, so
this
helps Malaysia a lot in trading and exchanging smoothly with other nations
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the world which gives
Malay
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a huge
of
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potential
chances
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to improve their finance,
relation
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relations
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,
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and economic
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economic
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. Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign
language
is
privilege
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, it costs no problems if we know how to exploit
this
chances
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and protect our origin.
Next,
knowing more than a
language
will create
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of job
opportunitie
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opportunities
. Take my acquaintance as an example, she was obligated
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Mandarin when she was
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kindergarden
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kindergarten
. She didn't like it
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the
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first ;
however
,
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was the main factor supporting her having her dream job in a big company when she grew
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In the modern city, the more languages you know the more flexible in job choices you have. To summarize, as long as we can preserve our official
language
and cultural beauty,
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lead
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it
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replaced by another
then
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having one more
language
plays a vital role. It will
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the country more diverse and erase many serious problems
such
as unemployment
instead
of bringing negative things.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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