Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion

Sports

are physical activities which have myriad benefits as recreation, exercise,pleasure and as a mode of income. In

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era, majority of the countries are expecting

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global recognition by facilitating

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major

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.

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the local citizens to engage in

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society negatively as elaborated by the following passages. Indisputably, it is generally believed that

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the government has the sole responsibility of creating a

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environment for the citizens.

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people's daily

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which is considered

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a key right of them.

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diseases,

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of mental health ,

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pleasure

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of the people the support given by the rulers on

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the common usage is usually crucial When comparing the top sport.

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, developing countries receive international funds to arrange local

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with

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utensils to assist the local citizens

due to

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importance

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importance

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On the other hand

, the future of the entire athletics

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on the

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living in that particular country.

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, training and recognizing the hidden talented sporters from the community is

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factor. Particularly, if the schools and the local community are not given the sporting

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assistance

the sustainability of

sports

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that Nation will be diminished.

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the locals.

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the top celebrities like cricketers and

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in most

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countries have started their Journey from

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rural

sports

clubs and

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schools

.

In contrast

, training and arrangement of the facilities for the international important sporters too have ample

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inevitable benefits like International publicity , the income received by them and

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the influx of foreign funds for the development of the

sports

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providing the facilities for the top athletes

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well as the common communities are equally important. So considering only one part of them will affect in a disadvantageous manner for that country.