The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.

The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of how much
American
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Americans
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use the
water
in their house
everyday
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every day
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with and without protection.
Overall
,
to consume
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consuming
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water
without
presevation
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preservation
reservation
records
same
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the same
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or higher figure than using conservation systems.
Tutning
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Turning
to the details, approximately 20
gallons
of using
water
without conservation technique, which represents the highest
proprtions
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proportions
proportion
among the seven types, is flushing a restroom.
On the other hand
, in the same types, the consumption with environmental strategies records to nearly 10
gallons
, almost double the using
unenvironmental
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an unenvironmental
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approach. Washing Clothes and Taking
shower
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a shower
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to
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apply
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consume
unrecyceld
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unrecycled
recycled
water
show to around 15gallons and 13gallons respectively,
wheareas
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whereas
using
recycle
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recycling
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methods in the same pattern record
to
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apply
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roughly 12 and 10gallons each.
While the
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leak
use
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uses
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10
gallons
without
protection
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the protection
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process, compared to 5
gallons
with conservation methods.
Lastly
, The other three types, which washing dishes, using faucets, and other uses, have
same
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the same
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recording of using and not using recycling.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, gallons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • gallons
  • household
  • laundry
  • irrigation
  • appliances
  • sanitation
  • efficiency
  • trends
  • disparities
  • anomalies
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