The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of how much
American
use the Replace the word
Americans
water
in their house everyday
with and without protection. Replace the word
every day
Overall
, to consume
Change the verb form
consuming
water
without presevation
records Correct your spelling
preservation
reservation
same
or higher figure than using conservation systems.
Correct article usage
the same
Tutning
to the details, approximately 20 Correct your spelling
Turning
gallons
of using water
without conservation technique, which represents the highest proprtions
among the seven types, is flushing a restroom. Correct your spelling
proportions
proportion
On the other hand
, in the same types, the consumption with environmental strategies records to nearly 10 gallons
, almost double the using unenvironmental
approach. Washing Clothes and Taking Correct article usage
an unenvironmental
shower
Add an article
a shower
to
consume Fix the infinitive
apply
unrecyceld
Correct your spelling
unrecycled
recycled
water
show to around 15gallons and 13gallons respectively, wheareas
using Correct your spelling
whereas
recycle
methods in the same pattern record Wrong verb form
recycling
to
roughly 12 and 10gallons each. Change preposition
apply
While the
leak Correct word choice
The
use
10 Change the verb form
uses
gallons
without protection
process, compared to 5 Correct article usage
the protection
gallons
with conservation methods.
Lastly
, The other three types, which washing dishes, using faucets, and other uses, have same
recording of using and not using recycling.Change the article
the same
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, gallons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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