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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables provide
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data about the relationship between temperatures and time throughout the day at a weekend in
London
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 and
Sydney
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 cities from 28th to 30th December.
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, from the tables,
it is clear that
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 the higher temperatures were in
Sydney
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 city with a huge variation but
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 the sunrise and sunset, had different patterns in the hours that occurred. The most interesting feature that emerges from the table is a quite dramatic divergence in connection with the weather. We could appreciate that in
Sydney
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 on the same day, the citizens had more than doubled that in
London
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, it is shown
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that in
Sydney
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, the time
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the sunrise is about two hours and a half before
London
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 but
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, in the case of the sunset is the opposite because it occurs approximately four hours after
London
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To sum up
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, the one feature that stands out is the climate that each city has.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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