The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now.
The maps illustrate how a village has developed since 1995.
Overall
,what stands out from the diagram is that recreational facilities saw significant developments,as well as
new houses.
In the year 1995,there were two roads,one of which ran from the southeast of the site to the northwestern of the area and the residential area lay along each side of this
road
also
,in the centre,there were a number of houses enclosed by a branch of this
road
.Furthermore
, almost all areas of the east side were captured by the farmland and woodland which was situated at the bottom of the former.Along the other road
,which halved the area south and north,there were commercial facilities,as well as
a fishing port.
At present,the number of houses is increasing along each side of the road
.Meanwhile,Farmland is converted into golf and the forest is knocked down to make way for tennis.Then
,to the east of the intersection of roads,the parking lot is built, after which shops are replaced with restaurants.Finally
,markets are demolished and replaced by building complexes and the fishing port is knocked down.Submitted by Name_1234 on
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