The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
information about United Kingdom Correct article usage
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graduate
and postgraduate students
and, students
who did part-time work
, voluntary, further
study
and unemployment
after leaving the university in 2008.
Overall
, number of postgraduate students
was not as much as graduate
students
. Numbers
of Correct article usage
The numbers
further
study
and part-time work
were greater than other
2 sections in both charts. Voluntary Correct article usage
the other
work
was the least in both charts. Further
study
of graduate
students
was approximately 10 times more than in postgraduate pupils.
According to
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the number
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work
was nearly 9 times less than further
study
which was 29665. Numbers
of part-time Correct article usage
The numbers
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and Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
unemployment
were close to each other. According to
amount
of postgraduate Add an article
the amount
students
, voluntary work
was approximately 4 times less than unemployment
which was 1625. Unemployment
was nearly 1000 less than part-time work
and part-time
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