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Structure
Ensure your essay is well-structured, starting with an introduction, followed by body paragraphs, each discussing a separate view or argument, and concluding with a summary of your stance.
Paragraphing
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Flow
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Task Response
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Supporting Details
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Task Achievement
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Structure
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Flow
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