You have just received a letter from an overseas university saying that your IELTS band score of 6 is too low for admission to any of its Master's courses (You need 6.5) Write a letter to the admissions officer. In your letter Introduce yourself Enquire about any alternative ways of gaining entrance
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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Keyhan and I am writing to ask about my
university
entrance admission for the next semester I have already applied to London University
.
As I mentioned earlier, I have applied for a data science major in the university
for the autumn semester with an IELTS overall
of 6, but I have received a letter which indicates acceptance is only allowed and possible with a band score of 6.5 for this
major.
Given these circumstances, I prepared to move to London in order to study at the university
. Therefore
, I would like to request you to recommend if there is any probable solution or alternate way to start the education in the coming term with this
IELTS score.
Since I am very enthusiastic to initiate university
sooner, I would be happy if the university
provides English classes so that I can boost my language knowledge and achieve a band score of 6.5.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks
Keyhan EbrahimiSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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greeting and closing
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The Closing
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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,