The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Temperature and Daylight Hours Temperature and Daylight Hours
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The tables display the temperatures and hours of daylight in two countries, London and Sydney at the same weekend in December 2018 from the 28th -the 30th of December 2018.
Overall
, it clearly can be seen that London and the UK had a total difference in every aspect such
as temperature degree,sunrise, and sunset time.
In terms of the features in London, the temperature started at 9 degrees celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
in
the first Change preposition
on
day
, and the next in
the second Change preposition
on
day
increased to 13, before going down on the last
day
. However
, the sunrise started at 05.45 and remained stable on the second day
, and after that step back a few minutes to the 30th. While
the sunset is relatively stable until the last
day
.
Regarding the all features in Sydney, temperature
on the 28th had a maximum of 26 degrees Add an article
the temperature
celcius
, and it remained stable until the 30th. Correct your spelling
celsius
Moreover
, the sunrise and sunset is
relatively stable until the Change the verb form
are
last
day
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 4 times.
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