The chart gives information about the diet and general health of two groups of students
The pie charts illustrate the diet system of people in different categories,
while
the table shows the date
on their health. Correct your spelling
data
Overall
, food which contains a lot of fat ranks first in both groups. Furthermore
, individuals in group
A attends
regularly compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
attend
other
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another group
other groups
group
. In terms of previous diseases and obesity, group
B accounts for higher percentages.
Looking into details, people who are in group
A and B predominantly consume unhealthy foods with Fix the agreement mistake
groups
a
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high fat
content, with Add a hyphen
high-fat
a
half and 30%, respectively, which is followed by cereals standing at 35% in both categories. Almost a fifth of Remove the article
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group
A eat vegetables on
their diet, Change preposition
in
however
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however,
this
indicator is just 5% among another
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other groups
group
alongside fruit and fish. Meanwhile, fruits and fish are responsible for 8% and 5% in group
A, respectively.
When it comes to table
, being overweight is less common among respondents with just 10% and 20%. Add an article
the table
Moreover
, just 5% of group
A was ill last
year, whereas
almost 10% of other group
experienced health issues. The majority of students in both groups participate in classes well, with 90% and 75%.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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