The table and charts below gve information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below gve information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table provided illustrates the sources where the total
amount
of
money
for Britain police came from in the years 2017 and 2018. The pie charts
also
depict the
amount
of
money
that was spent on different aspects including salaries, technology, and buildings and transport, in the same period of time.
Overall
, it is noticeable from the table that Britain's police budget mainly came from national governments in 2017, and remained the same afterwards in 2018. The charts are
also
showing that a large proportion of
this
money
was spent on salaries in both years.
To begin
with the table, in the year 2017, 175.5
million
pounds was the total budget for police offices in the UK, and the
number
provided by local taxes was significantly lower than
this
number
with 91.2
million
. In 2018,
moreover
, the
amount
of
money
provided by the national government slightly increased and reached almost 180
million
pounds, which caused the total
number
to experience an upward trend reaching the
number
of 318.6
million
overall
. The pie charts,
on the other hand
, showcase that a considerable
amount
of
this
budget has been given to officers and staff as their source of outcome, with 75% in 2017.
This
percentage,
however
, had slightly decreased by 6% a year after that, making room for technology purposes to grow by 7% to become 14% in 2018. The
amount
of
money
spent on buildings and transport,
however
, remained the same with 17% in both years.
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