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The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent.

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent.
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The given table illustrates the estimated
costing
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costs
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 for three environmental
projects
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 on maintainable
tree-lands
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tree lands
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 for the next five
years
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 in American
dollers
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dollars
, and the pie chart depicts the
first
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year
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 predicted budget as the
projects
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 are set up.
Overall
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,
South east
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 Asian project is expected to be more
costlyer
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costly
costlier
.
Furthermore
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, African and Central American
projects
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 are forecasted to be higher in
cost
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 for the
first
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 2
years
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comapared
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compared
 to the
last
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 three
years
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 ;but
South -east
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Southeast
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 Asia plan is expected to be higher in
cost
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 for the
last
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 3
years
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, compared to the
first
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 two
years
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. In detail,
West
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the West
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african
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 plan is estimated to be a 26.5 million
doller
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dollar
 project ,and
Central
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the Central
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american
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 one is planned on a 47 million
doller
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dollar
 total;
while
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 South
east
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Southeast
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 Asian one is estimated to be the highest in
cost
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 with a total of 190 million
dollers
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dollars
 for the five
years
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.
Furthermore
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, in
related
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 to the
first
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 year budget plan for three
projects
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, half of the expenditure is estimated to be on salaries ,and equal mere 10%
amoung
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among
 training and office
expences
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expenses
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.
In addition
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,
remaining
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the remaining
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 modest 30%
as
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is
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 the
set up
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cost
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, last".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words projects, years, first, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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