Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in diffrent countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear my friend.
I'm writing to you about
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
celebration. New Year
is a very important holiday
for my country
. Because New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
means new life and new plans. I think it's a very international holiday
. This
holiday
in my country
celebrate
Change the verb form
celebrates
31
Change preposition
on 31
december
. It's Change the capitalization
December
very
big Add an article
a very
holiday
in my family. Other countries celebrate this
holiday
different
times. I believe that Change preposition
at different
this
holiday
is a massive holiday
in Uzbekistan. Uzbekistan is a
not big, Correct article usage
apply
not
small Correct your spelling
nor
this
is a medium
Correct word choice
medium-sized
country
. But that's have
Change the verb form
that has
a
many large buildings. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
This
is a
alluring Change the article
an
country
I know. To my mind
Add a comma
mind,
that is
why this
holiday
widely
celebrated. It's Add a missing verb
is widely
fascinating
Add an article
a fascinating
holiday
in Uzbekistan. In my country
the New Add a comma
country,
Year
is celebrated a
festive table in every home. I wanted a new phone, a new bike, new clothes and a good reading for the New Change preposition
at a
Year
. Personally speaking
it's Add a comma
speaking,
absorbing
Correct article usage
an absorbing
holiday
in my country
ang
other countries. See you soon my friend. Have a good New Correct your spelling
and
Year
.
Your
faithfully
Sarvar.Correct the word
Yours
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly, with distinct paragraphs for each of the topics you are discussing (importance of New Year, how it's celebrated, and what you like about it).
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on structuring sentences more effectively for better readability.
Task Achievement
Remember to address all parts of the task in detail. Providing more specific examples of New Year celebrations in your country could enhance your response.
Task Achievement
You successfully communicated your enthusiasm for New Year celebrations, which makes your letter engaging.
Task Achievement
Using a friendly tone was suitable for this letter, making it feel personal and warm.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,