Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in diffrent countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

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Dear my friend. I'm writing to you about

New

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the New

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Year

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celebration. New

Year

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is a very important

holiday

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for my

country

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. Because

New

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the New

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Year

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means new life and new plans. I think it's a very international

holiday

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This

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holiday

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in my

country

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celebrate

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celebrates

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on 31

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december

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December

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. It's

very

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a very

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big

holiday

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in my family. Other countries celebrate

this

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holiday

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different

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at different

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times. I believe that

this

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holiday

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is a massive

holiday

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in Uzbekistan. Uzbekistan is

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apply

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not big,

not

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nor

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small

this

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is a

medium

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medium-sized

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country

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. But

that's have

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that has

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apply

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many large buildings.

This

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alluring

country

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I know. To my

mind

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mind,

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that is

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why

this

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holiday

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widely

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is widely

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celebrated. It's

fascinating

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a fascinating

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holiday

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in Uzbekistan. In my

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country

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country,

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the New

Year

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is celebrated

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at a

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festive table in every home. I wanted a new phone, a new bike, new clothes and a good reading for the New

Year

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. Personally

speaking

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speaking,

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it's

absorbing

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an absorbing

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holiday

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in my

country

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ang

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and

other countries. See you soon my friend. Have a good New

Year

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully Sarvar.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more clearly, with distinct paragraphs for each of the topics you are discussing (importance of New Year, how it's celebrated, and what you like about it).

Coherence and Cohesion

Work on structuring sentences more effectively for better readability.

Task Achievement

Remember to address all parts of the task in detail. Providing more specific examples of New Year celebrations in your country could enhance your response.

Task Achievement

You successfully communicated your enthusiasm for New Year celebrations, which makes your letter engaging.

Task Achievement

Using a friendly tone was suitable for this letter, making it feel personal and warm.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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