The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature.
The diagram displays the circulation of
carbon
dioxide in nature.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
carbon
naturally cycles through the ecosystem via sun, Use synonyms
plants
, waters and animals, Use synonyms
while
emissions from Linking Words
humans'
activities may alter Fix the agreement mistake
human'
this
procedure.
Linking Words
Carbon
dioxide in the air is absorbed by the oceans and vegetation on Earth. Use synonyms
Plants
combine CO2 and sunlight to produce nutrition for themselves via photosynthesis. Organic Use synonyms
carbon
enters the ground in two ways. The first is through waste matter from Use synonyms
plants
and the second way is when the bodies of Use synonyms
died
organisms decay. Replace the word
dead
Furthermore
, it becomes fossils and fossil fuels by accumulating in the soil Linking Words
years
by Fix the agreement mistake
year
years
.
In general, the breathing from animals and Fix the agreement mistake
year
plants
is released Use synonyms
to
the atmosphere and forms a new Change preposition
into
carbon
cycle again. Use synonyms
However
, the accumulation in Earth's crust is burned for energy by Linking Words
human
and there are tremendous emissions Fix the agreement mistake
humans
emit
into the air because of large amounts, only Wrong verb form
emitted
tiny
part of them can go into the cycle.Correct article usage
a tiny
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