Literature helps to develop a child's morals and feeling of humanity. As a result, from infancy until maturity, children should be given the chance to connect with literary works. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Morals and
feeling
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of humanity can be improved through literature
since
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early
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age. It is agreed there are many different
type
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of books
can
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be introduced to youth that help them to learn and develop it. Literature
bring
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a better way for
children
to grow their
mindset
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and
feeling
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. There are many
children
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books that could give many perspectives on how to treat other
people
beside
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family.
For instance
, there is a
book
that
specialized
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on
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how to behave around friends. It gives a simple story for young
people
to digest and
also
introduce
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different type of races and cultures around them as sometimes they do not have that kind of
people
as their friends.
Therefore
, the
children
will learn there are many
type
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of
people
and learn how to respect their
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and culture. Comic
book
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books
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also
teach youth to be more
empathical
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empathetic
person
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people
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. Sometimes when reading a comic
book
,
people
tend to see the negative sides of it.
While
the truth is the
book
could give them many values about friendship, family, and
also
goals in life.
For instance
, a
japanese
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manga called Naruto has a simple story about a kid who has a big goal in life to be a
hokage
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or the greatest ninja in his village. Throughout his journey, he values friendships and helps his teammate to pursue their dreams. His story can inspire young individuals to respect
others
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feelings. In conclusion, a child could benefit and learn about feelings and morals through literature works. Stories and characters inside
children
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books can easily digested to be a better human.
Furthermore
, to help with
this
family could introduce a
book
as early as possible for their kids.
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