The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2022.

The table compares information on the trends of consumption of different objects in several countries in 2002.

Overall

, leisure or education-related items represent the smallest proportion of consumer spending in all of the states concerned.

On the contrary

, every country spends more in the food/tobacco/drinks category of items.

While

Sweden has the tiniest percentage in the first column, Ireland

as well as

Turkey have the two most important consumer spending on objects related to that category in 2002.

Furthermore

, clothing with footwear fraction is between 5.40% going up to 9.00% for Italy. As far as Leisure/education items go, Turkey has the highest consumption rate at an impact of 4.35 of the used units. On the opposite, Spain has a ridiculously small amount of consumer spending in

this

column with only 1.98 per cent.

Finally

, the other countries' total sat between 2.00 per cent and 3.25 per cent in 2002 with objects concerned by the educative and leisure industries.

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