The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2022.

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The table compares information on the trends of consumption of different objects in several countries in 2002.

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, leisure or education-related items represent the smallest proportion of consumer spending in all of the states concerned.

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, every country spends more in the food/tobacco/drinks category of items.

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Sweden has the tiniest percentage in the first column, Ireland

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Turkey have the two most important consumer spending on objects related to that category in 2002.

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, clothing with footwear fraction is between 5.40% going up to 9.00% for Italy. As far as Leisure/education items go, Turkey has the highest consumption rate at an impact of 4.35 of the used units. On the opposite, Spain has a ridiculously small amount of consumer spending in

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column with only 1.98 per cent.

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, the other countries' total sat between 2.00 per cent and 3.25 per cent in 2002 with objects concerned by the educative and leisure industries.

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The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2022.

Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

It is better to learn the way people lived in past through films and videos records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Describe a time when you talked to a group of people.