Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country explain what you like about New Year celebration in your country
Dear Ahmad,
Hello, I hope you are doing well. I received your email, and I am writing
this
letter to help Linking Words
your
college project.
I think your project topic is about celebrating New Change preposition
with your
Year
in different countries. Use synonyms
Firstly
, you need to know about how vital New Linking Words
Year
is to people in Uzbekistan. In my country have a lot of holidays Use synonyms
for celebrating
but Change preposition
to celebrate
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
holiday is the most interesting and special Use synonyms
time
for my nation’s population.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, we are celebrating Linking Words
this
holiday with our close family. Linking Words
For instance
, around the table with special meals and some sweets Linking Words
also
. It is so good Linking Words
time
to talk with our family so closely. Use synonyms
In addition
, our people went to Linking Words
the
Change the word
their
friends
or neighbors’ homes Change noun form
friend's
friends'
for celebrating
or to congratulate with Change preposition
to celebrate
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
holiday during the evening.
If I talk about my Use synonyms
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
time
Use synonyms
to
New Change preposition
for
Year
celebration in my country is Use synonyms
firecracker
, it is so critical Add an article
a firecracker
time
Use synonyms
which
I like. Correct word choice
that
Firstly
, the Linking Words
neighbors’
children gather in one place to prepare to throw a firecracker. It gives us a lot of fun, mood and energy. Change the spelling
neighbours’
In addition
, I like my Linking Words
nations’
hospitality in Change noun form
nation’s
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
celebration.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
SamandarUse synonyms
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Vocabulary
Try to avoid repetitions of words and phrases. Using a wider range of vocabulary can help your letter sound more fluent and interesting.
Sentence Structure
Consider using varied sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement. This can also showcase your grasp of the English language.
Proofreading
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Content
You've nicely captured the essence of how New Year's is celebrated in Uzbekistan, which meets the task's requirements effectively.
Organization
Your letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Tone
The tone of your letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend, which matches the task's expectations.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite