The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The
supplies
diagram illustrates the proportion of carbon dioxide emission to Change the noun form
supply
atmosphere
per individual in the UK, Add an article
the atmosphere
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal in 1967 and 2007.
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Overall
, carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and Portugal rocketed up Linking Words
while
the United Kingdom and Linking Words
Sweden
plunged. Use synonyms
However
, the United Kingdom always had the highest metric Linking Words
tonnes
throughout four decades.
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Similarly
, Italy and Portugal had a low contribution in the first year, Linking Words
therefore
making up around 4 and 1.7 Linking Words
tonnes
respectively. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Italy skyrocketed to 6 Linking Words
tonnes
between 1977 and 1997, Use synonyms
whereas
Portugal saw Linking Words
the
2 Correct article usage
a
tonnes
rise from 1987 to 1997 correspondingly. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, those countries have gone up gradually and reached around 7 Linking Words
tonnes
in Italy and 5 Use synonyms
tonnes
in Portugal.
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On the contrary
, the United Kingdom and Linking Words
Sweden
started up with approximately similar trends. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Linking Words
Sweden
between 1977 and 1987 saw a sharp decline Use synonyms
for
almost 4 Change preposition
of
tonnes
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lose
. By Replace the word
loss
that
in the Add a comma
that,
last
year Linking Words
period
it leveled off with Portugal. The UK made up an upward tendency from 11 to 9 metrics, Add a comma
period,
however
, saved its first place in the emission rate.Linking Words
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