The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The
supplies
diagram illustrates the proportion of carbon dioxide emission to Change the noun form
supply
atmosphere
per individual in the UK, Add an article
the atmosphere
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal in 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and Portugal rocketed up while
the United Kingdom and Sweden
plunged. However
, the United Kingdom always had the highest metric tonnes
throughout four decades.
Similarly
, Italy and Portugal had a low contribution in the first year, therefore
making up around 4 and 1.7 tonnes
respectively. Nevertheless
, Italy skyrocketed to 6 tonnes
between 1977 and 1997, whereas
Portugal saw the
2 Correct article usage
a
tonnes
rise from 1987 to 1997 correspondingly. Furthermore
, those countries have gone up gradually and reached around 7 tonnes
in Italy and 5 tonnes
in Portugal.
On the contrary
, the United Kingdom and Sweden
started up with approximately similar trends. On the contrary
, Sweden
between 1977 and 1987 saw a sharp decline for
almost 4 Change preposition
of
tonnes
lose
. By Replace the word
loss
that
in the Add a comma
that,
last
year period
it leveled off with Portugal. The UK made up an upward tendency from 11 to 9 metrics, Add a comma
period,
however
, saved its first place in the emission rate.Submitted by dnm.best on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, on the contrary".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼