Your English speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Say how important New year is to people in your country Describe how New year is celebrated in your country Explain what you like about New year celebrations in your country
Dear Miss Larry Smith,
Hello, I hope you are well.I am writing
to
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apply
this
letter for
how to describe Change preposition
apply
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
in my country
.
I would like to write about New Year
is to how essential in my country
. First of all, we organize for Correct article usage
the chirstmas
chirstmas
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christmas
holiday
and buy a lot of of
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apply
present
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presents
to
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for
children
. Correct article usage
the children
Secondly
,we invite to
close friends and familiar. We will wait Fix the infinitive
apply
New
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for New
Year
during the a
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the
year
.
Christmas
holiday
is important our
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in our
country
so we celebrate every year
. We always celebrate this
holiday
is
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apply
year
. Firstly
, we buy a green tree and organize a christmas
present for Change the capitalization
Christmas
teen
. After Fix the agreement mistake
teens
that
we Add a comma
that,
wait
our special guests. Add the preposition
wait for
In addition
to this
, we decided to concert and sing New Year
songs. Furthermore
, many people intent
to a new ambition for next Replace the word
intend
year
.
If I explain what I like about Correct article usage
the christmas
christmas
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Christmas
holiday
celebration is
my Unnecessary verb
apply
country
is that I appreciate a
lot Correct pronoun usage
it a
receive
a lot of gifts. My parents and best friends give me Correct word choice
and receive
a books
. Correct the article-noun agreement
a book
books
This
is because,
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apply
this
books make me Change the determiner
these
open minded
. Added to Add a hyphen
open-minded
this
, I like to eat christmas
food. I cordially invite you Change the capitalization
Christmas
for
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to
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the christmas
christmas
table. I Change the capitalization
Christmas
am
very Wrong verb form
would be
appreciate
if you accept my Replace the word
appreciative
invite
.
I look forward to hearing you.
Yours sincerely,
Parizoda.Replace the word
invitation
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structure
Try to structure your paragraphs more clearly around one main idea. This helps in making your letter easier to follow.
grammar
For a more natural flow, vary your sentence structures and pay attention to the consistent use of tenses throughout the letter.
content
Be attentive to the distinction between New Year and Christmas celebrations, as the prompt specifically asks about New Year.
personal touch
You've celebrated the festive spirit and explained how the celebration is personally significant to you, which is great.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are both nicely done, adding a formal and friendly touch to your letter.
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