The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares three main obstacles faced by several age groups when they migrate to other countries. The age groups are 18 to 34, 35 to 54, and over 55.
Overall
, the main difficulties for each group are varied. For young
adults
(18 to 34 years old), the heavy job is to make new
friends
,
whereas
the late
adults
(35 to 54 years old) find it not easy to get a place to live. Meanwhile, mature people (over 55 years old) struggle to study the local language.
To begin
with, the most challenging thing for young
adults
is making
friends
with 46%, followed by finding a home (40%).
However
, learning the native tongue is an easy task for them which stands in the
last
place (29%).
On the other hand
, the late
adults
said the most troublesome is seeking
for
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accommodation (39%).
Besides
, making
friends
and learning their native tongue have similar proportions for them, 36% and 35% respectively.
Lastly
, the majority of mature people agreed that studying the local language is the main problem, which holds 55% of the proportion. When it comes to making
friends
and finding a home, they only accounted for 23% and 22%, respectively.
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