The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram set up the hear regarding to process setting.
The
showing
Wrong verb form
shows
process
of making Add an article
the process
a process
cheese
starting from raw
materials of Correct article usage
the raw
cheese
.
There were several equipments
were used to produce Correct your spelling
equipment
cheese
starting with mixer
Correct article usage
a mixer
through
mixing water and milk Change preposition
apply
then
mixing properly under suitable conditions temperature 5
degrees C , pressure and 2 hours of mixing to be homogeneous mixture after that next step would be cooling down Change preposition
of 5
then
the salt was added to production line . The most important process fermentation which converted
raw materials to partial Wrong verb form
converts
cheese
the time and special conditioning must be considered temperature of 35 degrees C and 2 hours of sediment.The evaporator machine was designed to evaporate the remaining liquid from production
line through Add an article
the production
this
method , the steam was released from evaporator
based on temperature control Correct article usage
the evaporator
100
degrees and 8 hours Change preposition
of 100
then
, specific measurementsAdd a missing verb
were
last
equipment was made to produce cheese
, named cooler or distilled tower which many proceed occurred filtering then
cooling and storage of products .Submitted by s116656m on
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