Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals believe that handwriting is totally needless for
children
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statement because learning how to write properly can offer Linking Words
children
inherent advantages in developing some crucial Use synonyms
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and concentration at an early age.
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children
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as well as
manipulate it in the right direction with great attention which altogether results in a better hand-eye coordination. Linking Words
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scientists, these fine motor Linking Words
skills
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physical
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later on. Use synonyms
For example
, in most Vietnamese kindergartens, handwriting is a compulsory lesson at school and it is noticed that Linking Words
children
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hands
usually outperform their peers in handicraft activities which requires good motor Fix the agreement mistake
hand
skills
from hands and eyes.
Another reason why Use synonyms
children
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might foster better concentration. It is undeniable that digital writing tools may be more versatile in the way that Linking Words
children
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while
writing, Linking Words
however
, it often leads to great distraction and hinders the child's actual Linking Words
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progress. Correct your spelling
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On the other hand
, sitting properly to write can do a better job in promoting Linking Words
children
's attention span which will benefit them a lot in other school subjects when they grow up. Use synonyms
For instance
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children
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