Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals believe that handwriting is totally needless for

children

in

this

digital era.

This

essay completely disagrees with

this

statement because learning how to write properly can offer

children

inherent advantages in developing some crucial

skills

and concentration at an early age. The primary reason to advocate the teaching of handwriting is that writing physically can assist

children

's early physical and cognitive development.

This

is because

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digital writing which requires little motion from the fingertips to touch the screen or type

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the

keyboards

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, handwriting

skills

demand more proper efforts from the child to grasp the writing tool correctly

as well as

manipulate it in the right direction with great attention which altogether results in a better hand-eye coordination.

According to

scientists, these fine motor

skills

are crucial to the development of the child's

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physical

and cognitive

skills

later on.

For example

, in most Vietnamese kindergartens, handwriting is a compulsory lesson at school and it is noticed that

children

who frequently practice writing by

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usually outperform their peers in handicraft activities which requires good motor

skills

from hands and eyes. Another reason why

children

should be taught handwriting

skills

is

this

might foster better concentration. It is undeniable that digital writing tools may be more versatile in the way that

children

can switch among a variety of applications

while

writing,

however

, it often leads to great distraction and hinders the child's actual

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acquisition

progress.

On the other hand

, sitting properly to write can do a better job in promoting

children

's attention span which will benefit them a lot in other school subjects when they grow up.

For instance

, educational studies report that early exposure to digital devices

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worsen the situation of ADHD

children

and writing

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physically

is

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both an alternative and a therapy to help them better concentrate at school. They distribute some writing tasks, scaling from easy to more difficult and gradually extending the time limit so as to keep these

children

at

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totally

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on their assignments. In conclusion,

while

handwriting is thought to be redundant in

this

technology era, I strongly believe it

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a lot of benefits to

children

's vital

skills

and their concentration.