The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The
line
graph shows how the consumption of different kinds of meats has changed from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, the line
of chicken
meat shows an increased trend
while
the lines of beef, lamb and fish meats show a decreased trend
in high or low levels.
Firstly
, the beef line
shows the highest consumption of over 200 grams
p
.p
. per week
in 1979 then
it reached its maximum peak in 1982 approximately from there there was a fall trend
where it found its lower consumption of over 100 grams
pp per week
in 2004. The chicken
line
shows the opposite trend
than the line
beef which means the chicken
line
had an increasing trend
from 1979 to 2004 this
trend
started with almost 150 grams
p
.p
. per week
in 1979 then
ended with 250 grams
p
.p
. per week
. Despite the lamb and chicken
line
starting with the same quantity of grams
around 150 grams
p
.p
. per week
in 1979 the trend
of the lamb line
decreased ending in over 50 grams
p
.p
. per week
in 2004. Finally
, the fish line
shows a constant trend
that kept around 50 grams
pp. per week
from 1979 to 2005.Submitted by Pilar on
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