The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the diagram that provides the flow chart for
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manufacturing
bricks
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for the construction industry.
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, there are 7 steps in the diagram, it commences with the digging procedure and ends with deliveries.
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the information shown in the flow chart clays will be digged by a digger at first.Afterwards, they will be filtered by a metal grid and will be put on a roller. After adding water and
sands
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, they will be either put into a wire cutter to be shaped into
bricks
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or filled in moulds to be formed as
bricks
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. When they become forms of
bricks
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, they will be placed
a
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drying oven for 24 to 48 hours.As the step of drying is completed, there will be two levels of heating before the cooling process. The first level is heated by a moderate degree around 200
°C
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to 980
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and the second one will be risen to 820
°C
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to 1300
°C
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. They will be delivered from heating kilns to a cooling chamber and be put there for 48 to 72 hours.Before being delivered by a vehicle,
theve
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there
is a packing procedure.
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