The pie charts compare data on the evolution of tourism in
Autralia
and Germany from 1960 to 2010.
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Australia
Overall
, Australia’s tourism has had varying nationalities of tourists during those 50 years. Linking Words
On the contrary
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German
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the German
seightseeing
industry has stayed almost the same with the exception of two origins.
In Australia, European tourists used to represent almost 53% of the whole Correct your spelling
sightseeing
while
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Asia’s
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Asia
would
only Verb problem
apply
take
up 10% of the Australian Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
touristic
industry. Yet, in 2010, Asia’s percentage of tourists in that country has Replace the word
tourist
immensly
grown reaching over 60%. Correct your spelling
immensely
On the other hand
, American and British sightseers only represented 22%, in 1960, and 27%, in 2010.
In Germany, the Linking Words
seightseers
statistics stayed similar over the years except for Britain’s Correct your spelling
sightseers
touristic
mass, Replace the word
tourist
whom
went from taking up 20% of the market to only 6% in the second chart. Change the pronoun
who
Furthermore
, European foreigners’ percentages have slightly decreased Linking Words
of
5% during those 50 years. Change preposition
by
Finally
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the
Asian representation in Germany has importantly increased reaching 25% in 2010 Correct article usage
apply
while
they used to only constitute 10% of the German market.Linking Words
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