The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The given maps give information about how Queen Mary Hospital changed in three different years(1960,1980 and 2000).
Overall
, while
the hospital remained for
the original site, there have been significant changes in facilities during the period given. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, the land which was occupied by car
Correct article usage
the car
park
has been reduced in size by a
half.
In 1960, opposite the main road, to the south, the hospital was built and it was located next to the shopping Correct article usage
apply
centre
. There was, however
, car
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a car
park
just below the hospital and a farmland in the west of car
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the car
park
.
In 1980, the shopping centre
was demolished in order to build the cancer centre
and pharmacy. Moreover
, farmland
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the farmland
converted
into a nursing school and reduced in size.
In 2000, Add a missing verb
was converted
while
the nursing school decreased in size by a
half Remove the article
apply
as well as
car
Correct article usage
the car
park
, the cancer centre
extended in a south eastly
direction where it overtook half of the land previously occupied by the nursing school.Correct your spelling
easterly
east
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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