the chart shows that male and female teacheres in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar chart delineates the distribution of male and female
educators
across six distinct educational sectors in the UK in 2010.
In general, female teachers are predominantly employed in foundational educational environments such
as Pre-School
, Primary School, and Secondary School. Correct your spelling
preschool
Conversely
, male educators
are more prevalent in advanced educational contexts like Private Training Institutes and Universities.
The highest concentration of female educators
is observed in Kindergarten, where they represent over 95% of the workforce. Similarly
, in graduate schools, female teachers dominate, comprising more than 90% of the workforce. However
, as the educational level progresses, the percentage of female teachers diminishes, dropping to less than 60% in secondary schools and achieving a balanced gender ratio in colleges.
Conversely
, male educators
are more prominently represented in advanced or specialized educational settings such
as private training Institutes and Universities. In Private Training Institutes, nearly 60% of educators
are male, and this
proportion rises to almost 70% in Universities.Submitted by rizkyy.utama22 on
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