The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words.
The table below
describe
the social and economic indicators for Change the verb form
describes
Canada
, Japan
, Peru and Zaire
in 1994.
Overall
, this
data demonstrates that Zaire
has the lowest numbers between
the other countries. Change preposition
among
While
Canada
and Japan
shows
the highest results.
In detail, Change the verb form
show
Canada
and Change noun form
Canada's
Japan
annual Change noun form
Japan's
income
were11100US and 15760US respectively. The life expectancy at birth Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
were
76 for Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Canada
and 78 for Japan
. Morever
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
Japan
reports a lower rate than Canada
around 2846 and 3326 respectively. While
,
the adult literacy rate Remove the comma
apply
indicate
the same results 99% in the two countries.
Moving on to the lowest Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
on
Change preposition
apply
the
rank Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
Zaire
which show
Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
the
minimal value in adult literacy rate Correct article usage
a
by
around 34%, in Change preposition
of
other
hand Peru indicate 68%. The life expectancy at birth in Correct article usage
the other
the
both countries was nearly equal to 50. The same pattern was for annual Remove the article
apply
income
160 and 130 for Peru and Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
Zaire
, the daily calories per person was
around 1927 Change the verb form
were
Correct word choice
and 1nd
1nd
1749 Change the ending
1st
respectevily
.Correct your spelling
respectively
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