The chart illustrates average co2 emissions
The line graph compares how much
co2
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CO2
emissions
per person in four massive countries( France, Norway, Spain
and Greece) between 1975 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
the individuals of France produced a great deal of carbon dioxide emissions
, the the
other three countries over the period. Remove the redundancy
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While
in Greece emission
was lower than Correct article usage
the emission
Spain
and Norway.
Turning to detail ,France started sharply in 1975 and produced approximately 11 Change preposition
in Spain
co2
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CO2
emissions
, then
it gradually dropped by 12 co2
in 2015. Regarding Norway , it Correct your spelling
CO2
begun
about 8 metric tons , Add the auxiliary verb
began
then
humans of this
country rapidly produced 10 metric tons of emissions
in 1985 and afterwards
it dramatically declined by 5 metric tons of carbon dioxide in 2015. Add a comma
afterwards,
Spain
significantly grew by 4 from 1975 to 2005. Spain
remains steady in the following 10 years. In
contrast
Greece was the lowest over the period and started at 1t, and next considerably increased by 4. 2t between 1975 and 2015.Add a comma
contrast,
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