Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be shut down. Others, however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Although
some people believe that Linking Words
zoos
play an important role in protecting wild Use synonyms
animals
, others feel that keeping Use synonyms
animals
locked up in Use synonyms
such
places can be cruel and unnecessary. Personally, I agree with the idea that Linking Words
animals
should not be kept in Use synonyms
zoos
and that Use synonyms
zoos
should be shut down.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some believe that Linking Words
zoos
are useful in some regard. Use synonyms
First,
Linking Words
zoos
can preserve endangered Use synonyms
animals
by keeping them safe from their predators or any other threat Use synonyms
such
as natural disasters or urbanisation. Some Linking Words
zoos
Use synonyms
also
run breeding programs in order to increase the numbers of some endangered species to help them avoid extinction. Linking Words
Second,
by keeping wild Linking Words
animals
in Use synonyms
zoos
, people can understand more about them and Use synonyms
this
can raise awareness amongst the public in order to preserve certain species.
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However
, Linking Words
while
the aforementioned idea may be true to a certain extent, I believe that Linking Words
zoos
are unnecessary for the following reasons. Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
zoos
are not the ideal places for wild Use synonyms
animals
to live. Some Use synonyms
zoos
only provide small cages to be inhabited by two to three Use synonyms
animals
, and not similar to their true habitat. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in some cases, Linking Words
animals
can be mistreated as they are often provided with insufficient food and medical care, which has so far caused many Use synonyms
animals
in Use synonyms
zoos
to die because of starvation or diseases. Use synonyms
For instance
, the death cases of 3 Javanese tigers in a zoo in Medan Linking Words
last
year were caused by the management officer not giving proper food and medicines to those tigers.
In conclusion, though some Linking Words
zoos
may have some positive impacts for conservations the certain animal species, Use synonyms
overall
, I think they are cruel places and do more harm than good to animal survival.Linking Words
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