the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the quantity of
wast
in three different companies (A,B and C) from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured by Correct your spelling
waste
tones
. Overall
, it can be seen A and B companies were the biggest residue producer at the beginning though they have shown
a decrease Wrong verb form
showed
at the end
of the period and company
C had a completely opposite trend.
In 2000, Capitalize word
Company
Company
A was the topmost waste creator with 12 tones
followed by company
B with approximately 8 Capitalize word
Company
tones
. However
, company
A tried to cut its residue down and experienced a steady drop to around 8 tones
in 2015. Also
, the latter rose to 11 tones
in just 5 years (2005) then
fell to 3 Correct word choice
and then
tones
at the end
of the period.
Finally
, company
C was in
the bottom of waste amount with 4 Change preposition
at
tones
in 2000. Although
, this
trend increased dramatically and stood at about 10 tones
in 2015 which is the highest amount among others.Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tones, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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