the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the quantity of
wast
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waste
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in three different companies (A,B and C) from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured by
tones
.
Overall
, it can be seen A and B companies were the biggest residue producer at the beginning though they
have shown
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showed
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a decrease
at the end
of the period and
company
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Company
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C had a completely opposite trend. In 2000,
Company
A was the topmost waste creator with 12
tones
followed by
company
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Company
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B with approximately 8
tones
.
However
,
company
A tried to cut its residue down and experienced a steady drop to around 8
tones
in 2015.
Also
, the latter rose to 11
tones
in just 5 years (2005)
then
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and then
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fell to 3
tones
at the end
of the period.
Finally
,
company
C was
in
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at
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the bottom of waste amount with 4
tones
in 2000.
Although
,
this
trend increased dramatically and stood at about 10
tones
in 2015 which is the highest amount among others.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tones, company with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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