the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of

wast

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waste

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in three different companies (A,B and C) from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured by

tones

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Overall

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, it can be seen A and B companies were the biggest residue producer at the beginning though they

have shown

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a decrease

at the end

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of the period and

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company

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Company

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C had a completely opposite trend. In 2000,

Company

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A was the topmost waste creator with 12

tones

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followed by

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company

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Company

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B with approximately 8

tones

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However

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company

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A tried to cut its residue down and experienced a steady drop to around 8

tones

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in 2015.

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, the latter rose to 11

tones

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in just 5 years (2005)

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then

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and then

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fell to 3

tones

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at the end

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of the period.

Finally

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company

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C was

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the bottom of waste amount with 4

tones

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in 2000.

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this

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trend increased dramatically and stood at about 10

tones

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in 2015 which is the highest amount among others.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tones, company with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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