The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
The given graph illustrates the sum of health spending as percentages of GPD and, it demonstrates the data about 12 countries in Europe for the
years
2002, 2007, and 2012.
Overall
, it is apparent that Switzerland has the highest health expenditure in all three years
equal to each others
. Change to a singular noun
other
By contrast
, Estonia has the least amount of expense of health in all the years
similar to the others. Furthermore
, Belgium and Spain have the same totals in the 3 of the years
with Belgium being 2 more than Spain.
Slovenia, Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, and, Poland all had the
identical charges in the Correct article usage
apply
years
2002 and 2007. However
, in 2013, they all were slightly more than the previous 2 years
with Denmark and Norway being the highest, and Lithuania being the lowest. Then
, the Netherlands where the percentage of funding has decreased by 1 every year. Subsequently
, Luxembourg was equivalent with
Spain in Change preposition
to
years
2002 and 2007, but had and downward trend in 2012. Correct article usage
the years
Finally
, France where in the year 2007 it hit the peak increasing from 2002 and declining gradually in 2012 again.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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