The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given charts demonstrate the data about the proportions of nations and their preferences about living in urban or suburban areas. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clearly seen that the majority of dwellers are local. Foreigners are mostly from Britain. Number of the people from New Zealand, China and Dutch is less than the number of other nationalities. Most of the dweller's priorities are living in cities rather than countryside. Moving to a more detailed analysis, Australians represent approximately 3 quarters of settlers in Australia, which is 73 per
cent
. British come next with a figure of less than 10 per
cent
and nearly double
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that
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of New Zealanders
which
Correct pronoun usage
who
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constitute 3 per
cent
of all nationalities. Chinese and Dutch share nearly the same percentages 2 and 1 per
cent
respectively. People from other nationalities are nearly 5 times less than Australians with the number of 14 per
cent
. In terms of living territories , people mostly live in cities, with a ratio higher than 80 per
cent
in all nations. Nearly all Chinese prefer city life
instead
of living far from technology in suburban areas. The figures for British, New Zealanders and Dutch are fluctuating between 80 and 90 per
cent
for urban parts and between 10 and 20 per
cent
for the countryside.
Correct article usage
The Chine
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Chine
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Chinese
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is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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the least living in rural zones with 1 per
cent
while
Australians are the most with a portion
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of
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20 per
cent
.
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