Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?
There is an ongoing trend that
human
workforce is changed with artificial intelligence(AI) and Correct article usage
the human
machines
in many places. The writer believes this
stems from the superiority of robots
, and impacts positively as it provides job opportunities.
It must be understood that AI and machines
are far finer than human
in terms of efficiency. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
This
is mainly because humans easily wear themselves out when working or studying for certain
amount of time and workload like a student continuously takes part in a lesson in 8 hours, Change the article
a certain
whereas
machines
and AI can still function smoothly for the akin load and time. Furthermore
, humanity is limited to their physical abilities due to
their natural bodies which are not built for labour-intensive jobs such
as carrying a car compared to machines
which are capable to hold
the same weight for Change preposition
of holding
much
longer period. Add an article
a much
As a result
, robots
and AI are assigned to complete the
Remove the article
apply
such
repetitive and heavy jobs for humans, and it is more
preferable to employers, especially in heavy industry. Take Vietnam as a typical example, where a report shows that 78% of companies which employ Correct quantifier usage
apply
machines
and robots
have seen a rise of about 50% of
production.
Despite people are constantly replaced by AI Change preposition
in
also
machines
, Correct article usage
the employment’s
employment’s
rate is actually increasing. In order Change noun form
employment
work
, human being Fix the infinitive
to work
raise
their level of efficiency and allow multitasking thanks to the establishment of Change the verb form
raises
machines
which then
enables several section
to be born Change to a plural noun
sections
included
programming and Wrong verb form
including
technician
. Fix the agreement mistake
technicians
Consequently
, chance
to have vacancies Add an article
a chance
the chance
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
rose
and Wrong verb form
rising
help
people to be employed. Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
For instance
, a survey in UK
found that 80% of programmers have their jobs Correct article usage
the UK
due to
development
of AI industries.
In conclusion, in the modern world, Correct article usage
the development
labourer
is substituted by Add an article
the labourer
a labourer
robots
and machines
because
their Add the preposition
because of
potentials
. Fix the agreement mistake
potential
However
, it
is no doubt they bring more employment than they replace, Correct pronoun usage
there
therefore
human
should exploit and develop AI and Fix the agreement mistake
humans
robots
for their own benefits
.Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
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