The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the development of cutting gizmo in the Stone Age.
This
essay will summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Overall
, tool
B
's side
view was lighter than Tool
A's side
view. Also
, their height was the same like 5 cm. And the Tool
B
was bigger than Tool
B
.
First,
Tool
A's three scene shapes were similar to each other. But, Tool
B
's three views were not similar. The side
look has changed over the 0.6 million-year period. Even though, the two tools' side
views changed, the other sides of the two mechanisms have not changed well over the years in the question. And that the two machine's colours have changed. 1.4 million years ago the gadget's colour was deep grey even 0.8 years ago the cutting apparatus's colour faded.
The cutting device's shape has changed to sharper and added more crystals over the 0.6 million-year period.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tool, b, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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