The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the advancements of working tools in the Stone Age in different
years
.
Overall
, it can be seen from both pictures the
size
and shape changed between
Tool
A and
Tool
B
. The
Size
of
tool
B
became fatter from the back
view
than it was in the initial
years
,
however
side
view
became thin and the front
view
became thicker. It is conspicuous that 1.4
million
years
ago the
size
of the front
view
tool
was a little thin.
Whereas
the
side
view
was thicker and the tip was not sharp. If look at
tool
a from the back
side
its width decreased,
while
its height extended. The
size
of the
tool
was 5 cm in 1.4
million
years
ago. Probing ahead, in the year 0.8
million
ago the front
view
of
tool
b
was wider as compared to
tool
A 1.4
million
years
ago and the tip became sharp enough to cut any objects.
Furthermore
, it can be experienced that the
side
view
of
Tool
B
became very thin in shape as compared to
Tool
A, it was fatter than
Tool
B
.
Additionally
, the back
view
of
Tool
B
became thicker and the base of the
tool
was larger in
size
compared to
Tool
A.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stone Age
  • tools
  • cutting
  • development
  • rudimentary
  • sophisticated
  • progression
  • unworked pebbles
  • flake tools
  • bifacial tools
  • efficiency
  • materials
  • emergence
  • characteristics
  • functionality
  • craftsmanship
  • precision
  • hunting
  • carving
  • advancements
  • significance
  • human development
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