You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts show the proportion of the arrested people by gender in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they
arrested
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.
Overall
, it is seen that the rate of people who
did
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were
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not arrested in 1994 was 68% for
males
and over four-fifths for
females
, and the highest percentage of people were arrested because of
drink
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driving. The percentage of men arrested was higher than
females
, and the figure was 32%. The highest reason why they
arrested
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was public drinking. These figures for the public drinking problems for
females
and
males
recorded over 35% and about 30%, respectively. With regards to the rate of breach of order and theft, there were more
males
than
females
.
On the other hand
, the women outrated the men in the assault. The most significant difference rate between
females
and
males
was driving in the state of drinking, recorded approximately over 25% of
females
and less than 15% for
males
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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