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The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.
#export #thousand #cars #uzbekistan
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison of
export
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cars
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 in Uzbekistan from 2014 to 2019. It is noticeable that the highest exports came from
type
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B
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 in 2018.
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, the lowest number of
export
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cars
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 was
type
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 A in 2015.
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, all types of
cars
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 fluctuated numbers year-by-year. In 2014, the number of exports in two types of
cars
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 started from 200
million
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cars
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type
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 A and 225
million
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cars
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type
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B
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.
Furthermore
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, the amount of
export
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cars
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type
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 A dropped to 150
million
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cars
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 but
cars
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type
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B
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 rose to 250
million
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cars
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 in 2015.
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, in 2016,
cars
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type
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 A skyrocketed by 75% from 2015 and
cars
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type
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B
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 decreased to 200
million
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cars
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 which was the lowest number of exports from
type
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B
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. In 2017, the gap in
export
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cars
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 between
type
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 A and
type
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B
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 was 100
million
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.
Then
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, in 2018, car
type
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 A sharply increased from 175
million
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cars
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 to 300
million
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cars
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 and
also
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 car
type
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B
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 rose from 275 to 325
million
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cars
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 which were higher
export
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cars
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 than in other years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, cars, type, b, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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