Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

Nowadays it is the most concerning phenomenon that the effects of global warming and the rising
sea
levels.
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essay first
state
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that the probable
problem
is
loss
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the loss
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of
lands
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land
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and the flooding
homes
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of homes
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and
give
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the prime solution that
build
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building
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barrier
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barriers
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and
reduce
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reducing
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pollution
. In the beginning, the new
problem
which
seen
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by
whole
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world is global warming and it
is
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caused many problems
that
is
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as
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flood
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flooding
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homes and loss the
lands
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land
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.
In every
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years
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in
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at
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a particular time many
country
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countries
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faceses
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face
flood
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which
is
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occur by the
rissing
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rising
of
sea
levels.
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,several
pepole
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people
lost their homes
as well as
their life and not only
this
many
sea side
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seaside
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areas and land low-lying under the
water
.
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a recently
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recently
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paris
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Paris
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journal article published that the rising
water
level in
the
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paris
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and 40
percent
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per cent
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land
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of land
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are in
the
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danger
to
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of
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lying under
sea
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seawater
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water
.
However
, the probable solution
are
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is
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makimg
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making
strong
barrier
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barriers
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and
reduced
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reducing
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pollution
. Global warming
occur
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beacuse
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because
of reducing too much carbon
dieoxide
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dioxide
and the
increse
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increase
of
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in
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temperature. If
it
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it is
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possible to produce less carbon footprint and getting
concern
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concerned
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in
pollution
it may
came
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come
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down
this
problem
.
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,
authority
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authorities
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or particular
sector
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sectors
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take
the
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action to build up stronger protection
in
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on
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sea
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the
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side so that the
water
does not come directly during
tbe
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the
flood.
For example
,
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the
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Nedarlands
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Nederlands
government took the step
last
year that they make more stable
barraier
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barrier
near the
sea
and they assure that it protects their local area from
sea
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seawater
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water
. In conclusion, the recent phenomenon
occuring
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occurring
a vivid range of
problem
flooding house and loss of land which are lead them but making
sea
side protection and reduce the
pollution
is the most accurate
sollution
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solution
.
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