The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The two maps illustrate the development of university campus
accommodation
and facilities between 2010 and the present day.
It can be seen that there was the demolition of facilities in the area, making way for the construction of students’ accommodations.
Firstly
, the number of student
accommodation
buildings has increased in number and size. while
a university office has been knocked down and transformed into a science building. In addition
, the northeast in
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of
this
area witnessed the demolition of a teaching block ( arts & science) in 2010 and the erection of an arts building. shops and restaurants have been removed and reconstructed
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student
accommodation
in the southeast.
While
the lawn and outside seating area which were next to the lake have been removed, the student
accommodation
has been expanded and became student
facilities including shops, offices, etc in the south of the university campus.Submitted by dongocuyennhi1102001 on
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